Quote Originally Posted by Markedman View Post
Paint Touches does a nice job of taking this apart.
http://painttouches.com/2014/05/27/i...-have-editors/
Agree but what is with the Philadelphia stuff?

Let’s take this a sentence at a time.

“I grew up in Milwaukee.” – Good start, making him an authority on the subject.

Everyone in the area recognizes Marquette as a school with high academic standards and an occasionally impressive basketball program” – Who is this everyone? Most people in Philadelphia, my residence, have no idea if MU is good academically or not and simply know it as that school Dwyane Wade went to that plays Villanova every year. Nationally, the basketball reputation outweighs the academic.


Everyone in the area means the Milwaukee area, not Philadelphia.